Comments on: Prologue – Birthday Suit

By: Zoe Hansen

Zoe Hansen — Thu, 31 Dec 2009 13:36:00 +0000

lauri, wow! Powerful & brilliantly written… Nice work. I finally had some time to sit back & catch up on some reading. Im a fan!!
Happiest of New Years!- Just got dumped with a foot of snow, makes the city so pure… call me when In NYC…love always Zoe xx

By: Antonia Crane

Antonia Crane — Sat, 05 Sep 2009 20:55:05 +0000

Hi Lauri, I can’t wait to read more of this book. I respect and admire your convictions regarding the publishing world.

By: Lauri

Lauri — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 17:26:22 +0000

Thank you very much.

By: Holistic Healing

Holistic Healing — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 00:39:04 +0000

Easily some of the best writing online. Amazed to see this level of detail (for free or for a fee). Keep up the good work, and thank you for opening my eyes to a new thing.

By: Sj

Sj — Wed, 10 Jun 2009 23:15:26 +0000

This is still as awesome as the time I first read it on Authonomy, what seems like a life-time ago.

By: Heidi Hough

Heidi Hough — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 18:59:58 +0000

hi lauri,

your writing is really good. i especially love this line: ‘I use the whip-smart, zealous logic of the seasoned hypocrite.’ You have some real introspection and wisdom that comes across in your story.
have you ever checked out open salon.com? i just started posting my story there.

By: Chris Poirier

Chris Poirier — Wed, 28 Jan 2009 16:14:46 +0000

Hi Lauri,

One of the members at webfictionguide.com recently submitted your story for inclusion in our listings. You can find the listing here:
http://webfictionguide.com/listings/servicing-the-pole/

Best regards!

Chris.

By: Abigail

Abigail — Fri, 09 Jan 2009 02:29:46 +0000

…er success…

By: Abigail

Abigail — Fri, 09 Jan 2009 02:29:10 +0000

Hello Lauri

Having just read the prologue, I think you absolutely made the right decision in not making it lighter, or making your protagonist more “likeable.” Her nature, and how clearly she sees herself, are exactly what sold me on reading more. If I picked this up in a bookstore, this prologue would ensure that the book went home with me. Something more “chick lit,” by the current, hi-fructose definition, would be left on the shelf.

I may write more as I read further. I wish you much future sucess!

By: Kozmo

Kozmo — Mon, 17 Nov 2008 16:19:33 +0000

thanks for this – I look forward to the next page. I have known and “loved” strippers my entire life and always wondered what is behind that face in the mirror. I’m aware of the guilt and shame of men and voyeurs and have successfully broken those binds.